I’ve been writing and rewriting my San Jose novel on and off since April of 2000. Each draft took months or years to write, but gradually each rewrite took a shorter time to complete. The rewrite before last took over three months.
The last one took only three days.
I began the rewrite on the evening of April 11 (after watching premiere of TWENTY, a movie I co-wrote) and by April 14 I had traversed the entirety of Redwood Summer. As slow and methodical as I write, that is light speed. It has taken so long to write this project because I began with no characters, plot, or any kind of story line. All I had was a long gestating idea of writing a novel about my hometown. I began by writing a series of unrelated set pieces, then main characters and a story arc about love, friendship, and how outside forces shape our lives began to emerge.
Between 2000 and 2012 I wrote six or seven drafts before I solved the vexing problem of how to begin the novel. I split the last chapter in half and made them the first and last chapters to frame the story, and all the middle chapters are a flashback. I also came up with the current title at that time. First title was Running Uphill, then on draft #2 I changed it to Heart’s Delight (after Valley of Heart’s Delight, the former nickname of Santa Clara Valley when it a capital of agriculture). Redwood Summer was an actual event in 1990 to save the redwoods and I allude to it in chapter 11 of the novel, as a title it seems like a perfect metaphor. I then put the novel aside for about four years.
In 2016 I returned to the novel and began the next series of rewrites and fine tuning. Slowly with each rewrite the novel became more defined and better paced. That’s also when I started posting the chapters to my site.
This most recent three day rewrite is a big step in the progress of my novel and I hope that this journey is at long last reaching its end.
I’ll make a few more minor changes, but at 50,223 words, it really feels done.
Here’s the novel’s home page https://robertkirkendall.com/redwoodsummer/
You can also go straight to chapter 1 here: https://robertkirkendall.com/2016/02/27/redwood-summer-part-i-chapter-1/
Congratulations on making this much progress and thanks for sharing it with us.
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Thank you, Pat!
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