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YOU SHOULD’VE LISTENED TO ME!
“I see a dark omen ahead for you,” the sorceress warned.
“Well that’s a bummer,” the man said nonchalantly.
“Heed my words!” the sorceress reiterated. “When a comet appears that is aligned with one of the planets, it will spell your doom!”
“How does a comet align with a planet?” the man said dismissively. “That doesn’t even make sense.”
“Doubt me at your own peril!”
“Planets move in orbits, comets go in a straight line,” the man explained condescendingly. “Crazy old bat,” he chuckled and left.
He crossed the street and was immediately struck by an old Mercury Comet.
Robert Kirkendall 
Ha, ha! He should have at least paid better attention at the crosswalk!
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If he survives he’ll remember 😀
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😅 love it!
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Thank you! 🙂
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Bwahahahaha! A Karma comet~~
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A Karmet 😀
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Zoom ssssizzzzle zoom!
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🤣
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Haha. That’s why one’s gotta love flash fiction. Read for a minute and leave happy😂
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Writing flash fiction is fun. ☺
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